A Bay Full of Surprises (Careful Navigation Required) WHSE177

Why It Doesn't Work

• The black bars on the top and bottom reduce the usable image space.
• The 'INDONESIA' text is too small and lacks impact for mobile viewers.
• The person on the boat is too small to be clearly seen or create intrigue.
• The image lacks a clear focal point, making it hard to understand at a glance.
• The composition is visually unbalanced, with too much empty space on the left.