I Owe You An Update… Here’s What’s Been Going On

Why It Doesn't Work

• The 'let's do a' text is too small and hard to read on mobile.
• The passport is too small and lacks visual emphasis to create intrigue.
• The thumbnail repeats the title's message without adding new information or curiosity.
• The overall composition feels unbalanced and lacks a strong, singular focal point.
• The expression is too subtle to effectively convey the emotion or urgency of the update.