"My first experiences were bewildering and disappointing"

Why It Doesn't Work

• The vertical video format leaves large, empty black bars on the sides.
• The subject's expression is neutral and doesn't convey the 'bewildering' or 'disappointing' emotions from the title.
• The text overlay is too small and difficult to read, especially on mobile devices.
• The thumbnail lacks visual intrigue or a clear hook to grab attention.
• The overall composition is cluttered with the microphone and background elements.