Service | Ordinary Time | 7.19.26

Why It Doesn't Work

• Too much text makes it impossible to read quickly on mobile screens.
• The background image is blurry and lacks a clear, engaging focal point.
• The text simply repeats information from the title, missing a chance to create intrigue.
• The overall design feels unpolished and lacks visual impact to grab attention.
• The thumbnail fails to evoke any curiosity or emotion in the viewer.